Talk:Transcript: The Mills Radius/@comment-25441293-20141016062411/@comment-25441293-20141018161749

On second reading, I removed the longer parenthetical explanations. These would be better as footnotes. Most readers would be interested in the transcription, so to keep the flow, added stuff should be no more than a word or two. Or letters like (a) (b) etc that lead to footnotes below the transcript.